Here are 5 simple tips to improve one’s writing, I found in my archives.
Tip # 1 – Delete the word “that”
You believe that I’m sleeping, but I’m not.
Now, let’s try again without “that”.
You believe I’m sleeping, but I’m not.
Tip # 2 – Avoid words that end in “ing”
The food I am eating is usually very disappointing. What are you eating?
Now, let’s try it without the -ing.
The food I eat usually disappoints. What do you eat?
Tip # 3 – Remove the words “I think”
“I think, this computer is faster” becomes “this computer is faster.”
The words, “I think” add no real value to the sentence.
Tip # 4 – Short Sentences, Shorter Paragraphs
Write short sentences. Write shorter paragraphs.
This tip is from Ernest Hemingway. Most classics have long sentences, longer paragraphs. Not Hemingway. His style came from being a journalist from Kansas City Star.
His best example about short sentences and shorter paragraphs is this:
For sale: Baby shoes. Never worn.
A powerful six-word story.
Tip # 5 – Be positive, not negative
Another tip from Hemingway. Write what is, not what isn’t.
Instead of saying, this is painless, say, this is comfortable.
Instead of expensive, say economical.
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